Feedback

We got feedback on our proposal to try to improve our opening sequence to heighten audience appeal. 

Need to do :

-Pin down specifics and practicalities
- Start planning exact shots
- Decide on your exact lighting eg. high contrast lighting, over saturated shots with dark background
- Start the timeline, planning shots and storyboard


Representation
The stereotype of teenagers taking drugs is being reinforced rather than broken, desipte that drugs are not being endorsed in the sequence.

Main Character
Plan her interactions with people and any dialogue within the sequence. Plan how you are going to get her characteristics across to the audience. How will she seem strong and independent.

Lighting
Light training on Friday 1st.
We can take portable lighting kits back to Alice's house to test lighting and the set up of our shoot.
Plan in detail the type of ligghting we want in the party scene in contrast to the overdose scene.
The vision of the shots needs to be decided fully.

Planning Stage
Decided on:
Sunday 3rd: Test shoot
Dry run one day after school
Real shoot 1
Real shoot 2

This is the double sided handout we made to give to the 
class when we presented our proposal to them for feedback.